Voh ik nazar jis par umr hui guzar,
Aisi umr ka kya bhala jab uth gayi nazar
Subah jiska uthna, jhukna shaam hua
Phirte hi, lo dekho, hamaara din tamaam hua
Na tujh se liye hain vaada, na karein koi jafa
Nazaron ka vaasta tha, nazarein hui khafa
Nazarein utha chale ho to phir na milaana tum
Varna is sailaab mein ho jaoge tum bhi gum
Nazaron ke uthne phirne ke silsile chalte rahein
Inhi nazaron ke kahe pe kai baar nikal padein
Nazaren yoon laagaane pe kisi ki aisi nazar lagi
Zara nazar jo hati to dekha ki hawa hi badal chali
Nazaron ke pher vaale, tujhko kya nazar karein
Piroye the kuchh gile, kuchh sile- tere daaman ko bharein
Ik nazar dekh lete jee bhar ke, ham kadam
Umr bhar ka pee lete, jee lete ek-dam
Translation:
Voh ik nazar jis par umr hui guzar,
Aisi umr ka kya bhala jo uth hi gayi nazar
(Let’s talk of) That one look on which we (I) spent our entire life
What good is such a life, when that look(attention/love) has gone away
Subah jiska uthna, jhukna shaam hua
Phirte hi us nazar ka, dekho, din tamaam hua
It became morning when it rose, it’s falling was (my) evening
As it turned (away), look, the day has ended
Na tujh se liye hain vaada, na karein koi jafa
Nazaron ka vaasta tha, nazarein hui khafa
I have taken no promises from you, nor have I been faithless
Our eyes (look) had a connection, Our eyes are annoyed
Nazarein utha chale ho to phir na milaana tum
Varna is sailaab mein ho jaoge tum bhi gum
Now that you have lifted (away) your eyes, now don’t join them again
Or in this flood, you too will get lost
Nazaron ke uthne phirne ke silsile chalte rahein
Inhi nazaron ke kahe pe kai baar nikal padein
The turning (away) and returning of our eyes is a tale that goes on and on
Listening to the say of these eyes, we have often traveled far
Nazaren yoon laagaane pe kisi ki aisi nazar lagi
Zara nazar jo hati to dekha ki hawa hi badal chali
On getting attached to you, some one put the evil eye
I just looked away for a second and the wind had changed
Nazaron ke pher vaale, tujhko kya nazar karein
Piroye the kuchh gile, kuchh sile- tere daaman ko bharein
You of the eyes that turn/trick, what shall I gift (present to your eyes) to you
I’d strung some complaints, some (deserved) revenge, let me fill your heart with that
Phir bhi,
Ik nazar dekh lete jee bhar ke, ham kadam
Umr bhar ka pee lete, jee lete ek-dam
Even so,
One last time I would have liked to see you, you who stepped in time with me
I would have drunk my fill for a life time, I would have lived (it in) one- breath
Comments:
These verses play on the word Nazar that literally mean eyesight, but have various idiomatic meanings.
In the first verse here, it stands for attention, love.
In the second verse, it is implied – not mentioned. Though the modified verse in the translation includes it – again to imply interest/attention.
In the third verse Nazar is used in the sense of look/connection.
In the fourth verse, the word Nazar is used in the absence, or lifting of the look, implying disaffection at the least, or alienation of affections.
In the fifth verse, Nazar is the signaller of intent, it directs action – sending the protagonists down the path of commitment or back.
In the sixth verse, Nazar invokes the evil eye. The first Nazar is about attraction and attachment (when eyes meet and get attached, attracted to each other), but this also attracts the evil eye – which is the second usage of Nazar in the first line. The third usage of Nazar is about looking away – a bit of inattention and its consequences.
In the seventh verse, Nazar builds on the previous meaning but the proximity of the word ‘pher’ implies trickery, almost intentional. This is a bitter verse, and the Nazar is the tool of that illusory game. The second time the word Nazar is used in the sense of ‘gift’.. something that is presented to the receiver’s attention/eye.
The eighth verse, wistful, even traditional – Nazar becomes not just the last long look at one’s lover but also the vessel in which the memory of affection is stored, enough to last a lifetime.
There is a bit of word play built elsewhere too – for example in the last words – ek-dam. It could either mean ‘one breath’ or it could mean ‘now/instantly’.. The phrase could thus either mean – “I’d live for one instant’, or “I’d live my whole life in that instant’ or “I’d live my whole life on (the memory of/the filled breath of) that instant. It either means instant death, or a constant life – whichever way you read it.
As ever, thank you for reading. I am grateful for the chance to play with the gems that are these words.
Acknowledgement: ( Inspired by a tweet by @akhtar978 – ‘Ek nazar ke liye umr bhar ! umr bhar ke liye ek nazar !! :-)’.. the tweet resonated for a couple of days and became these verses)
(c) Meeta Sengupta
For those who like such wordplay, here is one in English that I had written a while ago: Score http://thepointofatangent.wordpress.com/2013/11/02/score/
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